Friday, October 17, 2008

Death before life......

With fire in the eyes,
And vengeance on his mind,
He put the bullets through her head.

As she fell on the floor, that smile came back.

The blood from her body smeared all the papers
That flew out from her hands.
"Must be another of those letters that she hides from me," he thought.
And he picked them up only to realize,
That along with her, a part of himself died in her womb,
A flower plucked before it could bloom......



S.R.

3 comments:

Abhi Binani said...

ummazinggg !!!! as if an upanyaas summarised in 6 lines dat rhymes too ;)

Its so sensibly poetic and the best part being... in 6 lines u hv mixed so many emotions.... brilliant twist in the end too..

did i said.... deep deep bow to you :P

keep it up gr8 wrk seriously :)

Siddhartha said...

Wonderful poem buddy....short and great....keep it up.......i am trying here to be short and simple as well....so i will just summarize in three words.....keep it up..........

Saket said...

Thanxx guys.. I never liked this just because the central theme was not likeable. I know even u will agree on that. However, your comments are making me think over it again.I will try to come up with few more soon.....